[2024-feb-29] Sad news: Eric Layton aka Nocturnal Slacker aka vtel57 passed away on Feb 26th, shortly after hospitalization. He was one of our Wiki's most prominent admins. He will be missed.
This is an old revision of the document!
Created 10-19-2012 — Larry Kraemer 2012/10/19 15:00
Tips about style
Hi Larry. I would like to suggest that you to re-write the text “I finally found how to get the DOSBox CPU Speed (Cycles) Decreased with CNTL+F11…” into something more neutral. If you write a piece of documentation for many other people to read (as opposed to voicing your personal opinion in a discussion forum), you should add as little as possible of your “personal struggles” to get things going.
A text like “If you have issues with getting the DOSBox CPU Speed (Cycles) Decreased with CNTL+F11… then the cause may be your Window Manager. The solution is…” sounds more professional.
— Eric Hameleers 2012/10/20 05:58
